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Evelyn replied to the topic Poetry Critque, pretty please? (: in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@libby Thanks Libby for your help!! 🙂
Though I would agree with taking out the “hope” I’m a bit hesitant, do to meter and syllable count. Do you think it’s worth it?
And yes… you have a good point about that other verse. 😛 *facepalm*












