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I thought I’ll order it according to the most problematic ones.

1. Plot holes–This is a big one for me. For one thing, my novel is divided into three parts that were originally three separate books (but I decided to mash it together since I have a pet peeve against trilogies). For another, it has several storylines and layers since it deals with 7 dimensions. So it’s a challenging task not to forget parts of the clockwork…
2. Loose ends–This kind of runs off the first one. I try to have each part loosely tied, but I’m still working out the details of part 3 and I feel like this could be a problem.
3. Underdeveloped world building–This happened to me in part 2 of the novel, in which I suddenly realized that I didn’t finish constructing the museum where the story takes place. I found out the hard way that characters can’t build worlds as they go–you have to be intentional about it–and I was doing NaNo, so it was hectic for me. But I usually try my best to build worlds and the general outline before I plunge into it.
4. Not enough (or too much!) foreboding–I think I have both problems?
5. Underdeveloped relationships–I’m good at building relationships for some of the characters, and for others, it’s like I fell asleep on the job.
6. Characters without motivation–Okay, so I have details about most characters, but I suddenly realized how one character doesn’t really know what they’re doing on that page.
7. Side characters (or main characters) who lack development–Basically the same as the one from above.
8. Not enough backstory shown–This was kind of problematic in part 1 since I didn’t want to reveal too much, but part 2 has some more backstories, so I think it balances it out.
9. Anticlimactic climax–
10. Dramatic, but unrealistic–Okay, I’ll admit sometimes I do this. But who doesn’t?
11. Cliche plot elements/scenes–Umm, I might have a few of those? But what’s a sci-fi without a psychopathic doctor?!
12. Characters that disappear–I think this happened once. But I usually try not to erase people off pages if I can help it.
13. Unclear character voice–I think I have distinct character voices. I might need some work on different age groups, though.
14. Inconsistent world building/characters–I kind of live in my own world, so…
15. Too low stakes–Is that a thing? Of course, the world will end along with the rest of humanity in all of my stories. 🙂

So that’s kind of my strengths and weaknesses that I think is true. (Or I might be off. Like, I might actually not have plot holes.)