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@noahlitle

Okay, makes sense.

Well, even if there not that good, I still think it’s awesome that you write screenplays!

And I wouldn’t say Good and Evil is terrible; I’d say it just needs some help, just like most people’s first or second drafts. 😀 Seriously, some of the writing is actually really good and I’m not just saying that to be nice.

@cassandraia

Nailed it! 😉

Okay, I’ll try and remember that advice! Thanks!

@msqueen8

I have seven older siblings. 😀

Here’s a description of the book because I’m lazy and don’t want to try and think up how to describe it in an exciting way…(I’m not good at that stuff anyway.😛)

In this intriguing mystery, Captain Fortesque finds himself torn between two loyalties. Having been educated in the finest schools in England, he enjoyed acceptance in high society, but kept his true upbringing a secret. Then the day came that changed the course of his life. It all started with the mysterious note that could only be read after his father’s death. Will he be able to endure the dramatic challenges he will now face?

I loved the mystery part of it…it’s done really well. And I love the romance between two of the characters. It’s so sweet and genuine and isn’t cringey at all. (I don’t want to say anything else because than I might spoil it! 😛)

Elthir is coming along…very slow, but pretty steady. Elyria is coming along well too. My sister and I stayed up till midnight last night filling in plot holes and brain storming together. 😉 WOW!! That’s quite a compliment! Thank you! But honestly, LOTR wasn’t even on my mind when I was creating Elthir…but I wouldn’t be surprised if I was subconciously influenced by Tolkien, I love his work.

I saw that you added a couple more articles a few days ago. Your world is looking very interesting! Inspector Hoffman seems especially intriguing.😀 Happy World building!