-
Thomas replied to the topic Giving critique in videos! in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
Ouch. Just plain ouch.
The contest word count limit was 2,000 words, so you’re right, I should’ve added more. I usually write big.
Smack-dab right on the theme, by the way.
I know how paragraph formatting works, but thank you for pointing that out. This was a first-draft get-this-done-now kinda thing. I had time to make it better, but I was lazy.
Overall, this is an example of me rushing. Don’t rush it, kids.
Many thanks, Taylor, for making your way through my (poorly written) story. I’m planning on sending you stuff in the future (formatted properly, of course.)












