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<p style=”text-align: left;”>Thanks for the feedback @quinn-ofallon !</p>
Do you think “Grandma’s House” or “Grandma’s Ghost” would make for better titles? If not, do you have any other ideas for me?

And I can see what you mean about the first part being kind of bland. What do you think about cutting the first line and the Lazarus line out entirely and asking the question (where did we get the idea of ghosts) more subtly and possibly more creepily while extending the actual story by a line or two?

And how do you mean your poetry sounds forced? I’d be willing to take a look and offer feedback if you’d like.

Thanks again!