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  • NicoleG replied to the topic Flash Fiction/Short Story in the forum Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago

    @mairin-atha

     

    This makes me teary eyed. The theme and the story it portrays…huhu BEAUTIFUL. There is so much meaning and hope running through the words. I love how it brandishes your poetic style. There were a few paragraphs that I  had to read again in order to grasp the full meaning and effect you were going for (like I had to pick up again on how the story proceeds beyond the poetic description), but overall, I LOVED THIS. Huhu. It makes such a hopeful piece for the holidays as well. Looking forward to more stories like this from you 🙂

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