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@h-jones  That is so beautiful.  I like the way you left out the capitalization;  it’s always neat to be able to create something beyond the limits of English grammar.  One thing I noticed was slightly incongruous was how it started as an “afternoon betwixt the walls”  and suddenly became the “moon cascading… through the night.”  As for the second stanza, at first I thought the last line seemed a little out of place, but reading the whole thing, it kinda ties in with” a wraith of everything i used to be.”

Overall, great job!