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theinconceivable1 replied to the topic Any guys out there? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
light blazes into my lone eye. I gasp and my hands rush to my chest. The blade is gone, nothing even hurts! I blink and raise my hand as I try and peer into the glorious light shining before me. “THEINCONCEIAVBLEONE…” suddenly the light fades and I see an angle shaking his head “Couldn’t your parents have named you with a simpler name?” I blink twice “what?” “I mean TheInconceavbleOne, doesn’t really role off the tongue…” I look behind me “Are ye talking to me?” The angel crosses this bursting arms “Of corse I’m talking to you! Do you see anyone else here?” I scanned the barren fluffy cloud landscape “Uh, no…” Suddenly hes right behind me and putting his arm around my shoulder “Look, despite the fact that your name is the worst, the big guy has a message for you. He says: “There is neither Jew nor Gentile, neither slave nor free, nor is there male and female, for you are all one in Christ Jesus.” SO!” he clapped his meaty hands together “You’ve got a revolution to start!” I looked at him “What are thee babbling about? Where am…” “Oh!” he let me go “I almost forgot!” In a flash, he drew his sword and plunged it through my heart. I glared at him “I hate ye” he grinned “not for long you won’t!” Suddenly the sword within my chest began to tingle. I looked down at its golden blade and read the inscription upon its silver hilt. “I have been crucified with Christ; and it is no longer I who live, but Christ lives in me; and the life which I now live in the flesh I live by faith in the Son of God, who loved me and gave Himself up for me.” Suddenly that warmth exploded within me and life surged through my veins! I felt joy fill my craggy old heart and my being. The angle yanked the blade free and I stumbled back. I steadied my self and looked at my hands. they glowed! I smiled looked back at the angle “Whatever you just did I like it!” I gasped “what happened to my voice!” He shrugged “Its a package deal… anyway, hope you like being a new creation and have fun with the revolution!” “Wait, what do you mean…” Suddenly the clouds imploded upon themselves and I find myself laying on the gound. I took a few quick breaths. I felt amazing! I sprung to my feet and found my dual blade lying on the floor and a crowd surrounding the gaping hole in the bar’s roof. I snatched it up and laughed. The crowd gasped collectively “He’s alive!” “How…” “His eye… its glowing!” I blinked and held up my hand ot my hole of an eye. Light like fire danced on my hand! I shook my head this just keeps getting better! I grinned time to start a revolution.
My deep voice resonated through the tavern. “Once you knew me as the revolutionary, bent on destroying the test that had destroyed me. But now, now I am a new man! Dead is that man of the past and in his place stands a, well, *I chuckled* slightly stranger and more glowing, man. I am here to unite you, my fellow Emberians, to throw off the shackles of race and status this test has brought into our land! To embrace the truth that all are equals in the sight of our God and to unite under this banner. JOIN ME, IN THE REVOLUTION OF UNITY!!!
(sorry, I got bored of being dead XD there not much to do! and besides, I figured we needed a new cause. BTW, if you join the remodeled revolution you get to be immortal so… thats nice! Our new mission is to get rid of all the titles levels (which, granted, is fairly… similar to the earlier revolution but hey, its technically different!)












