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@devastate-lasting your poor character 😛 I got the sense that Hathach’s vice is most definitely is self-hatred/self-destructiveness. His virtue seemed to be loving other people even when they didn’t love him back, and through this scene, he was seeing that virtue as something that inflicted pain on him…thus continuing the cycle of self-hatred.

My one note would be to show these traits more, rather than have him narrate the story in this thoughts. I still got the gist of it, but keeping to what Hathach was doing in the present moment may have gotten them across stronger. But the overall summary of his backstory did speak volumes about his character. 🙂