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@wordsmith: alright, well lets start with a fun one! why does Elijah get to summon bears to beat up the kids who were mocking him? I know its kinda strange but it just seems to go against Jesus whole “turn the other cheek” message and God seems to be more like a weapon in these such passages…

@bella-b: well I’m glad I’m appreciated XD

@taylorclogston: No I’m not saying that! You were just being honest and I would much rather have an honest critic than a lying one that makes me feel good XD. Your that person that got me to start reading books about writing which, even with what little I’ve read, has done me a wrold of good. So ya, your critique wasnt very…comforting but it was honest and in the words of the proverbs “Faithful are the wounds of a friend; but the kisses of an enemy are deceitful.” (not saying you ‘wounded’ me but you know what I mean!)

@parker: alright well thanks : D and your welcome! I think critiquing each other’s writing is kinda like the iron sharpens iron thing!