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Libby replied to the topic Edmund's Sunset – a poem in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
Just worked on a new, more hopeful ending. If you have any feedback, I’m still up for it!
The quiet mountains shadowed over
Where she last had danced abroad—
In the sands, there grew a clover,
Solitary in its grace.
And in that place of crumbled sod
Sweet heaven cast a blissful ray.












