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Hey, guys! So, I haven’t been on here as much as I wanted lately, but I have taken up the challenge of posting something every month for these three months. I have decided to share the prologue and first two chapters of my book Classified: A Hostanica File. So, for this month, I will share the prologue.

This prologue is about six pages and exactly 2734 words. 🙂 Feel free to correct me spelling and grammatical errors if you want to, but I’m mainly looking for critiques on…

1: How the story flows.

2: If you understand what is happening. (Sometimes, because I know my own story so well, I can’t tell if it’s making sense to others. I want it too be somewhat mysterious in the prologue, but not so much that it’s hard to understand.)

And… I guess that’s it. 🙂 Any other suggestions are welcome. Although, I won’t really take any plot/story critiques, because this is the second/third draft version and the story is pretty set.

So… here is the document. I hope guys enjoy the story will you are critiquing it. 🙂

Side note: I will be taking this doc down on Oct. 5, like it says in the title. I’m just going to do that for security reasons, but just a warning. XD That’s all I have to say. Now, to tag some people.

@morreafirebird, @catwing, @devastate-lasting, @emma, @enu, @emgc, @sarah-inkdragon, @inkspiller, @snaps571, @allison-grace, and…. I really should remember more, sorry.

Anyways, I really have to go now. Oh, and if I did something wrong, and I wasn’t supposed to put this here, or this soon, or something like that, please tell me. I look forward to getting your feedback. XD