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Hello people ;

So this my very first story I wrote . This is how I came to know my story writing talent . So iam thinking of making it into an animated film . So I need feedbacks to improve it. This is certainly not a great story cause I finished it in an hour as an assignment for my media subject . I haven’t touched it after that except making it digital and correcting some spelling mistake .. so I want to refine it more and make it more appealing

. Thank you

So notes about the story : it’s a cartoonish thriller story about two theives.