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@morreafirebird

Thanks so much! I was actually thinking about doing a break… but it seemed rather abrupt and untidy for the first page… I’ll experiment a little with it. 😉

And as for surviving… I’m actually considering a sad ending to this story. So you might get your wish. 🙁

@devastate-lasting

Yeah, I’m about 3/4 through S1. But S3 looks soooo cool.

And this story is going to be in 3rd person omniscent POV. Sorry for the 1st person lovers out there, but I despise 1st person POV most of the time. I just like the way I can reveal feelings and thoughts through other people in 3rd person. Like:

I curled up on the chair into a miserable ball, ignoring Will’s outreached fingers. He tried to put his hand on my shoulder, but I shrugged him off and looked away, trying to hide my tears.

V.S.

Will watched as Emily’s shoulders hunched forwards and she huddled into the chair, her long red bangs hiding vibrant green eyes from sight. Gently, he reached a hand out to comfort her, but she went stiff under his fingertips and turned her face away, light glinting off tears on her pale cheeks.

And ignore my terrible 1st person. I never bother to practice it because I despise it so. 😉