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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Romance… *nervous cough* in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@wordsmith Yeah, you did seem to interact like brothers. 😀 Ooh, I wish I was in the guilds! I missed the sign-ups and they haven’t opened them again yet. Yeah, you did seem to interact like brothers. 😀
That is oh so close. I’m getting warmer, I think, to catching the envisioning I’ve had for the ending. I think it would be good to have something like that… something like… she has her plan to leave, that’s what she’s going to do, because she reasons that there’s nothing to keep her here, but at the same time she feels that she wants a reason to stay but she doesn’t think she has one. She’s about to go ahead with her plan to leave, but they all come to the bus station (I just added a bus station to the town, thanks for that idea :D) they don’t want her to leave and then clay steps forward and says he’d specifically like her to stay. That is pretty good sounding to me.












