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Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic FIRST SE FICTION STORY: RAIDERS OF THE LOST ARC in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@mariposa *Can’t breathe*
😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
The opening has so many good parts…but I think this is my favorite:
Pennsylvania shined the light on the wall and pointed to the hieroglyphics. “Hey, can you read this?”
Storm leaned over, grabbing a blood-red chisel from her violet satchel. She started etching into the wall.
Pennsylvania furrowed his brows. “What are you doing?”
“There’s a typo.”
Pennsylvania sighed. “Hey, can’t you just read it? We’re so close to the treasure!”
She shook her head and continued chiseling while Edna glared at Pennsylvania for his impatience.












