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  • Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago

    @calidris

    Avin was in prison when Elsa found him and asked him to help her find the prince, her brother. He first pointed out the difficulties, then broke out and accompanied her. She was NOT happy, and thought he was in prison for a crime. She hurt him a lot, mostly unintentionally, but once on purpose, because he wouldn’t tell her where they were going, and she was fed up, scared, and thought he was a blackguard. She ran away, into the teeth of a snowstorm, hit her head, and  was knocked unconscious. Avin found her, brought her to a cave, and made exhausting trips through the storm for {details} to keep them both alive. When she woke up she realized she’s been nasty, apologized, and he told her his backstory and the real reason he was in prison.

    Sorry. That was a lot of words, but I couldn’t think to do it in fewer.

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