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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
@calidris Okay! Avin is medium to tall (6 ft., maybe. 5’8″, something like that). He has muddy brown hair that is shoulder length and kept out of the way. (I NEVER think of him like this, lol.) He is strong and lithe, and very quick/quiet, since he’s expert in all things woodcraft. He has a chiseled, brown-tanned face with high cheekbones. Stone-gray eyes.
He has scars laced ALL over his back which he obviously doesn’t show, but they curl up around the right side of his neck/cheek.
He can completely mask his feelings, has crazy-good perception for a guy, and is very sensitive, though tougher than all get-out, because he’s had to be. He came from rotten garbage (slang for the worst orphanage in writing history) and has been falsely imprisoned once. Now he’s a duke and married to the princess. He’s also a halfbreed, which nobody knows, but he’s very sensitive about anyway. One of the most compassionate people you’ll ever meet, but okay with tough love. (and you say his name AY-vin (as in Hay, but without the “h”).
What does Kit look like? And is that a nickname?
@irishcelticredflowercrown this is totally class. XD YES! I’m glad you liked it. He was blocking Abirami from getting out, and Avin was kind of arguing with him because he realized that Abirami needed to get out. Yeah, we were all lost a little bit ago–partly my fault–so hopefully we’re getting on track. Would a run-down of the situation help?










