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@thewirelessblade sometimes if my story moves along too fast it’s actually a show vs. tell problem. If I’m more interested in the action scenes than what’s happening in between, I have a bad habit of summarising characterisation and scene-setting so I can get to the interesting parts more quickly. It actually just makes the story confusing and disjointed.

I don’t know if this is the problem you’re having, but it might help.