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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 1 month ago
Okay, can I just say how much I love that part!? It makes me like Abirami so much more. He was literally willing to take the injuries he’d dealt to the others. That’s an awfully big sacrifice. I love it so much!Thank you. It’s actually a big part of his character. He regularly puts himself in danger in my stories to protect those he cares about, regardless of the danger to himself. In fact, my first story with Abirami ends with him taking very dangerous essence-boosting pills just to help his family escape the enemy, which puts him in a coma (which is where book two starts – he wakes from the coma without any memories). hehe. that’s also why Ku hits him so much at the beginning of the scene, because he regularly does that (putting himself in danger for the sake of others).
He looked far too close to fainting. The green-skinned girl was standing over him, apparently just as annoyed at his stupidity as I was.haha! yes! she knows it won’t kill him so she’s not worried, and she would be super annoyed at him for throwing her out of the castle and for doing something so dangerous.
good entry. looking forward to meeting Halmar










