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WishingWell13 replied to the topic My very short prolouge in the forum Critiques 7 years, 9 months ago
Okie, I have three options for who is writing this: (It was originally going to be Kriln, but…)
1. Jaydon. Ok so he isn’t married at the beginning of the book, but he eventually does at the end. Plus his fiance at the beginning is sometimes bossy but not much. (I just realised that 99% of my female characters are bossy and usually independent)
2. Kriln. He’s a fighting trainer and has know the princes ever since they were born. since their actual father was always busy and never really had time for his kids, Kriln kinda took over the father role. His wife, Chrissie, is the toughest woman I have ever created so she really is very stubborn when she wants somebody to do something. Plus she believes in recording battles and wars and stuff like that. But she doesn’t know how to read or write so it makes sense that Kriln would be doing the recording for her.
3. ALEX! I LOVE ALEX! Sorry, (☺) got a bit excited there! Alex is a fighter too (Like 99.99% of everyone in the story) and he is a rule follower. But sometimes he is a bit too cautious and ends of regretting not taking more chances and discovering more. He’ll probably end up marrying Kite in the end since she brings out his adventurous side.
So those are the people I have in line for the “Who, exactly is writing the prologue of this book since I didn’t take the time to figure it out myself”” contest . Thanks so much for reading this, fellow writers!












