Well, here goes.

Crow

The…[Read more]

Nahim Nayhelm was today twenty-one. The Laxorian landscape of tall grasslands was filled with armored Realn as they prepared for the ensuing battle on the old ruin grounds of the city of Laxan. As Nahim’s hands glided through the checks of his weapons, he thought back through all the birthdays he had had o…[Read more]

1. Laxan
Billowing smoke filled the air. Lava drooled into the city streets. Rock soared into the air to land on crawling Nanian bugs. Ash was mixed in with every shaking breath. They had lost. The…[Read more]

Lets see… General Zeinli Danu-Windu, her Padawan Goane, and Clone Captain Bo’.
There’s also her cousin, a Mando and part of a sect in the Order but not a Jedi, although he has a lightsaber. Lt. Will Danu.

Then there was Agent Jaina Danu, his sister, an agent for the republic. S…[Read more]

I think the second one would be cool.  It would give us a new setting to work with as well.

Yeah that might be helpful.  I only skimmed a few of the older posts though.

Oh yeah, would you be able send me the descriptions of your characters again? I tried to find the file in older posts but it didn’t seem to be working.

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It looks like the last things that happened is the group with Solstice, Zeinli, Cresh, Bo’, and Rookie are in the forest planning their next course of action, and the rest of them (including the king and the prince) are on a republic ship that has just been captured by the Separatists.

My original idea was for the characters to repair t…[Read more]

Ah lol, okay.

okay cool. Let me edit it some and I will.

I learned a lot last year, haha.  It was a crazy year but it was good.

No, I see the email.  I have two emails and I don’t regularly check the one I gave to you 🫤.  That was my bad.

Hehe sounds super cool!! Yes, shoot me the story, I’d love to read it.

Hmmm… what was the gmail you used for when I sent the sw fanfic doc…? Because I might’ve emailed the wrong person Lolol

Hehe actually… I might send you the story. It starts as a rp with a friend with rebels charas but then I wrote the rest. And I love this new character………..

lol kk

Sweet!

Oh, I must not have seen.  Sorry! My primary email is raspberrryrose05 at gmail.com if you ever need to reach me again and if you didn’t already have it.

Really? What is your idea?

Okay! I’ll look back and see what exactly is going on in this story….

I actually had the most amazing idea that goes great with my Depa Jarrus! 😀

we Can keep going with the roleplay if you’d like. If we can figure out what we were doing lol!

Hello!! Sorry for the late reply.

Indeed, it has been a very long time!  How was 2022 for you?

Would you like to continue the roleplay? Or start a new one?  I’m open to any ideas you may have. 😁

I have Aspergers.
I like playing video games and watching cartoons.
And I have anxiety issues.

Currently, I’m working on a rewrite of the Star Wars Original Trilogy… specifically publishing the thing.
It’s not what it sounds like.

Its been such a long time!

A little bit about me:
Loves coffee,
Loves cats,
Loves daydreaming about writing,
Aspiring to make a difference with words.

At the moment I’m writing a serial story about a Globalised Society connected by Alternate/Virtual Reality.
Is this…[Read more]

That is very encouraging.  I am becoming increasingly alarmed by the serious attention given to the “transhumanism” movement that is taking over our youth cultures who are abandoning faith and moral and foundational traditions that have stabilized communities. These “self-defined progressives” are instead becoming…[Read more]

So, I don’t have much/any advice on the publishing front, but I just had to pop in and comment!

I want to be able to talk about God like its 1880s Kansas, but with the sense of yearning and progress that space provides. I have an agricultural research planet run by an interstellar version of NASA. The rest of the plot is just dealing…

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My plot is largely literary, and I’ve also been…[Read more]

It doesn’t strike me as derivative of 80s movies. At least from the part posted, I get more of an Andy Weir vibe, the near-future perspective, pulling from all those extant schools and organizations. Also, even amid words like “quarantine,”…[Read more]

I thought I might drop a little bit of it here to see what you guys think of it.  Is it w…[Read more]

Thank you for the tip!  That would work a lot better than what i currently wrote. I know Jake is technically waking up in a strange scenario, but it would probably be better if he didn’t struggle and waited to see what would happen.

Again, thank you for the fighting tips! They are certainly one of my many weak spots…[Read more]

Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh a lot…? (nix almost cried, I did cry, a lot…😭😭😭)

Lol, I figured out that my MC’s scar symbolizes choice, and I learned the story behind that aaaaaaaand the story behind why he compulsively tells the truth in every situation even though he’s very very…[Read more]

Thank you for the tip! I was thinking something was off with that scene! If one of the guards hit Jake in the stomach with his knee, would that work?

I just love how Story Embers has writers and authors of various age groups!

I noticed something here…

Think about the physical proximity of the two guards that would be on either side of him.  Punching their captive in the mouth would make more sense if he was upright and facing them, or pinned to the wall.  At best, a guard might give him a grazing blow down the side of his jaw, but that would b…[Read more]

(I remembered telling you about this so I wanted to tag you as well 😁)

@this-is-not-an-alien @obrian-of-the-surface-world @Gracie-J, @lissie-w, @fitz, @jbstanhope @rose-colored-fancy

(I block quoted the beginning because I’m considering removing it)

A brief FYI: a character does say ” if I’m to go to h—, I’ll take some with me”, I know some people are sensitive to the use of the word ‘Hell…[Read more]

Here’s part two!

(I block quoted the beginning because I’m considering removing it)

A brief FYI: a character does say ” if I’m to go to h—, I’ll take some with me”, I know some people are sensitive to the use of the word ‘Hell…[Read more]