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Tinuviel started the topic Critique A Story in the forum Critiques 6 years, 10 months ago
There’s so many explanations I could give for this story, and so many things I could say. But I’ve been trying to just let my work stand on its own feet recently, so here you all are! Rip it to shreds XD. I don’t take criticism at all personally, so feel free to say whatever you like.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/19xwJ9vW32YGgHV7vWLWLnoAIJm-uUwbYv4SjM6mVFes/edit?usp=sharing
I’ve never done anything in Google Docs before, so if it is in the wrong format for you all to edit or something, let me know.












