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Cathy replied to the topic 52 Challenge in the forum Horror writers 5 years, 3 months ago
@hannahrenner
‘K sis. Challenge accepted…ish!
Here’s something like a short story I cooked up…idk how long ago… đSee You Over the Edge
If you can read this youâre all alone.
The guns are in the graffiti locker, the one with the red star. Trust me, youâll need them. If you hear a bump donât open the door. We wonât be there, but they will. Under the bed are your instructions, which is how you found this paper, assumably. The TV doesnât work but thereâs a camera in the ceiling. If youâre in a masochistic mood thereâs Ramin Noodles under the TV and a Rubik cube under the desk. But you canât win the Rubik by peeling the stickers around; I spray painted them on to drive my partner crazy.
Youâre probably confused, or youâre experienced enough you wonât need this.
Ok, so hereâs the deal; about a century or so ago pre-modern scientists and behavioral-analysists developed a game chip thatâs been introduced to our dictator AI. Theyâve probably told you something about the Bystander-Syndrome where the average person does not intervene in strangersâ lives. The example has been a murder in a subway in front of approximately three hundred persons who did nothing; roughly half of these didnât even realize there was a problem. However, the rare few who donât fall to Bystander-Syndrome are the most dangerous segment of the population. Congratulations, if youâre here you fall into that faction and the government has deemed you a threat to national security.
You see, youâre the type more willing to question authority and notice inconsistencies. The Bystanderâs Test is just a cover, naturally; it also tests your logical aptitude, your private moral convictions, your leadership capacity and basically the probability of you seeing that everything wrong with this system and rebelling.
Donât worry; youâre the last of us. Nobody expects you to save the world and you just want to live, right?
First, test the computer panel that we hid it in the TV; itâs that green square-shaped thingy with the punch lines and buttons and the big sticky note that says âComputer Panelâ on it (youâre welcome). Now take that with you to the locker. See the stupid mirror with the paper flower rim all over it? Look sharp and peel the cover; itâll come off like nothing. See the phone? (If you donât, sorry; youâre dead). Insert panel in mirror.Can you read this?
Yes/No
View options?
1. Turn left. Head straight 10.46 km. Left. Further instructions continâŠ
2. Wait for them. Theyâll break down the passage (:bump).
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Load the gun; youâll need it. If you hear nothing but static theyâve already found you.If you can read this youâre all alone.
Congrats, youâre still alive! If you shot them, move the bodies into the lockers. Donât worry, the lockers are emptied every fifteen minutes, if I explained why you wouldnât like it. If youâre injured the first-aid kit is behind the hand-print in the wall art. Welcome to Room 666.
I hope you brought the Rubik with you; itâll be a while. I donât know if thereâs any food left but you can check their pockets; grab the keys. Most likely theyâll have a knife somewhere on them; use it to dig the chip out of their wrist. It really stinks but wipe it off and press the chip in your wrist, donât worry; itâll push itself in. You can use strips of their cloths to stanch the wound(s)
Stay in the corners and you might survive the night. Depending on how much blood youâve lost youâre going to need to drink a lot of water; thereâs a canteen on every one of them. By the end youâll need all you can get. If youâre out of bullets, steal them.
I donât know if Iâll live long enough to help you so just remember if you hear a bump, donât open the door. If you want to deep six now youâve got plenty of bullets but I wouldnât recommend it. Chances are, your nerve will fail and youâll miss mostly, which means a very long painful death. Itâs not worth it; you can still make it out of here. Try the Rubik cube.
Do you know what a mathematical matrix is? Itâs a cluster of numbers treated as one numeratical entity. If you add one to any of the numbers you add to all of them. Same with subtracting and multiplying and rooting and cubing etc etc etc. Right now everythingâs a matrix. Every action you make affects everyone. If you know anything and youâre captured, weâre all dead. Trust me.Ca48 540e j49 ; ââ44 4*/+
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Can you read this?
Yes/No
View options?
1. Hack the main computer to open door. Step 1; initiate program instructions continâŠ
2. Surrender. Tell everything.
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Have you ever played Prisonerâs Dilemma? It goes like this; two (or more) people are captured and the bad guys give them three options. One; you betray your friend and bounce scot-free out while your friend holds firm and gets the devilâs due. Two; you both hold firm and get a light tap out of it. Three; you both betray each other and you each get half of whatâs coming to you.
If Iâm not here, itâs over. I canât promise option two so donât bother over your conscience too hard.
If you can walk, get out of here. If you hear the lockers or the slide doors bump donât open the doors! I hope you found something to eat but I canât help you there. Cloths are above the wires on the second door. Wear the cap. Keep your head down. Next comes the walk through.
Hold your arm out and let them scan your wrist. All your injuries; hide them!
By now youâre at Checkpoint 66; basically, nobodyâs made it past here, so good luck! We think youâre close to the end but itâs a labyrinth in here (youâve noticed?). The Tower has 6,666 stories according to legend. Talk about a bad omen. If the guards let you past thereâs supposed to be a sky gate leading out. Take one of their machines; itâs your only choice unless you want to chill on the other side. If you get out youâre outside the cities. We donât know whatâs past that. But the government placed a protective field around the sky levels for a reason, so be super careful.
If youâre reading this Iâm probably dead. Itâs not that I have much of a legacy to leave behind and my friends are probably dead too. Just focus on staying alive, ok? If enough of you guys live, you can build a community outside of the walls. I know it. Donât make the same mistakes we made. Donât develop artificial intelligences to rule you; unexpected complications happen. People arenât trustworthy but at least theyâre human.
The machine has picked the best and the brightest people to live. Thatâs about to begin so anyone you leave behind will probably die. If youâre different or have any health issue they wonât let you take up valuable space. Just remember every person has a purpose and nobody deserves to die.
Iâm rooting for you so donât kill off on me. Tomorrowâs my sixteenth birthday! Iâm also out of paper just remember if you can reaâŠShe fixed her stare on the handcuffs, focusing all her efforts on ignoring everything else. A slick slap of the doors sliding open caught behind her. Not looking up, she stiffened and smothered a cough.
âName and purpose.â The voice above her required tonelessly so she matched the expression.
âDesignated or preferred.â
âDesignated.â
She sighed and stretched her arms awkwardly, further bunching the wrinkles on her Mario T-shirt. With a half attempt to flip back her hood with the bill of her cap, the prisoner mindlessly twisted her cuffs.
âAB7489. Project Behavioral Analysis of Post-Trauma Disorders.â she droned
âCome with me.â The person didnât bother dragging her to her feet and she got up of her own accord. Clip, clopping footsteps echoed deafeningly on the reflecting floors. She blinked back blurry lights that assaulted her adjusting hyacinth eyes. Counting tiles just made her dizzier so minutes or hours sifted by unmeasured. Everyone wore the same polished shoes with the same noisy steps so she derived morbid pleasure from her threaded sneakers with mismatched socks.
The elevator went up forever but nobody spoke. Words were scripted to meet etiquette. Mostly. These would be the last steps she took, wouldnât they? Possibly, or possibly there was a place outside with the real sunlight and real people. There wasâsomewhere.
âIf you can read this. Youâre not alone.â










