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@devastate-lasting

Thank you so much for reading this! I read your piece as well, but I haven’t gotten around to writing up a whole critique…. school ate me.

Oh, someone else who likes my prose. *grin* I always thought it was to bland, but now I’m starting to see it in a different light thanks to everyone on this site. 😉

Yeah, the transitions are a bit choppy. I really need to go over and rewrite so stuff to make it clearer, and add in just a bit more description.

I’m glad you’re interested in Kirin! I myself can’t wait until he meets the first of my other two MCs. It’ll be…. interesting. (Well, technically he’s already met him, I mean the other MC is in this chapter. Somewhere. *evil author cackles*  But still, when they meet face-to-face it’ll be soooo much fun to write.)

*places left hand on heart* *realizes its the wrong hand* (Bear with me, I’m a lefty) I solemnly swear to someday finish my book, preferably before I’m 81. *reveals crossed fingers* Okay, kidding. I will. Eventually. (Won’t we all, eventually? XD)