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  • Sageinthemeadow replied to the topic Opinion on a Peter Pan retake in the forum Critiques 7 years, 9 months ago

    @snaps571 What a unique idea! I think you have a lot of potential here to make something really interesting. Sarah Inkdragon already covered all of the important stuff. But if you wanted another take on things, what if you reversed the theme?

    What if the ‘real world’ had to be saved somehow? (And that’s why your characters are being called back?) Just throwing some ideas out there. There are so many possible routes this story could take, you have a lot of freedom, but I would try to narrow down what your main goal is, and everything else will begin to fall into place.

    Good luck!

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