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I agree that it should have stakes (beyond the obvious stake inherent in conversion). I’m not sure life and death should be it though. I worry that it will be too easy to make it cliche if we go that route.

What is another way we could raise the stakes? Would it be cliche if the character was on the verge of doing something awful? Or what if it was in the wake of someone close to the character doing something awful?

Everyone here is mentioning that their conversion was boring and when they were young. Could we make a story out of a conversion like this and the moment they put their trust in God? More cutesy than deadly, but maybe we could imply stakes, perhaps for a sibling.