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R.M. Archer replied to the topic Post the first paragraph of your WIP here and get feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@nuetrobolt It’s not particularly clear that the majority of the story is the book he’s reading. Does Edward become more important later on? Is part of the book his story and part of it Philip’s? Or is it just Philip’s after the pre-prologue?












