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Noodle-Mum replied to the topic Expedition (help me with a flash fiction story I'm writing?) in the forum New Wessex Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
Ooooo! It was really fascinating! I felt the overall tone in the beginning gave it a very foreboding feeling, at least to me, that quickly turned to hope. Gary is so sweet and you can’t help but to fall in love with him and his goofy shyness around his wife.
I was a little confused with all the scene changed and where they were happening, but besides that, I thought it was brilliant! ^_^ fantastic job!
Also I love Gary so very much!










