Activity

@r-m-archer
Wow! Okay that was a well thought out answer. I see your point and I will be looking into how to fix these issues in the rewrite. Thank you for pointing those out! No one had brought those points up before, so I really appreciate it. 🙂

So much to do now. But before I start really planning how to fix all this, I wanted to ask if you had any other insights for me that I really ought to fix. It helps getting feedback from another writer.

I’ll keep my eye out for that story you mentioned. 🙂 Thank you for the recommendation.