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  • Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago

    oh snap, I forgot about the future self thing, whoops 😅

    ________

    EVE:

    “Hello?”

    I whipped around, a little unsettled that the voice sounded a bit like mine.

    A woman with completely white hair, yet with more middle-aged features, stood before me and Calix. The wrinkles around her nose and forehead were sunken and deep, indicating she was regularly stressed and/or unhappy.

    “Could you please tell us where we are, ma’am?” Calix asked politely.

    The woman gazed at my brother for a while, smiling a bit. “You’re here at the Castle.” Her voice was paper-thin and weak.

    “The Castle?” I blinked a bit. “But we were supposed to have gone to … Tàme-tho’oa …”

    The old woman fiddled with the silver tassels around her navy-blue hood. “How is everyone back home?”

    Wait what? Is she from the Cìrrith Islands too?

    “Who are you?” I demanded.

    The woman smiled. “I am your future self, Eve Meir. I am fifty-nine years old, and I am an accomplished holder of Sun magic.”

    No …

    No, this couldn’t be …

    How could she be me?

    How did I attain the control of fire magic?

    What does my homeland look like where she’s from?

    Why do I look so unhappy??

    I’m happy, I promise …

    “Old Eve??” Calix breathes, completely intrigued. “Wow … you, uh … you look good, ma’am.”

    Ah, my poor, polite brother. What a lie.

    I looked horribly haggard.

    Old Eve smiled at Calix. “Thank you for the kindness, Cal, but I really don’t.”

    I nearly laughed.

    “So wait … if you’re Old Eve,” Calix said, “there must be an Old Calix too, right?”

    Old Eve’s face fell suddenly.

    No …

    No no no no no no-

    My head snapped over to Calix, who had suddenly gone pale, staring almost distantly at Old Eve.

    Oh goodness.

    Good Dhâra, no.

    Tears rolled down the cheeks of both Old Eve and Calix. My own vision even blurred.

    Then Calix took off running.

    “CALIX!” I and Old Eve shouted at the same time. But none of us made the move to go after him.

    ______

    there, now they are able to interact with others lol

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