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Oh. My. Gosh. @donna-darling this is marvelous! I absolutely love it. The style really reminds me of Howl’s moving castle. The humor was hilarious, and I loved the creepiness, but didn’t feel like it was overly dark. I don’t have any major critiques. There are parts that are almost telling, but that is consistent throughout the story and feels more like a choice of style rather than sloppy writing, so I think it’s ok. Very cool. Hurry and write part 3!