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@jared-williams

*tries to get over how epic those animals sound so I can move on* *fails* 😂

Hmm, ok. I feel like there isn’t much debate going on here… 😂
(Dang it, I’m gonna have to use my brain to come up with a name. Come on imagination… *decides to sit on sister’s bed until she throws ideas at me* There, that’s easier… 😂😂😂)

It can also help in explaining his actions and the rationale for what he/she does.

Yeah, that’s why I asked. I’m planning to redeem a villain but am trying to figure out why and their backstory. And then if I should put the backstory in…
It’s still in the plotting stage so I don’t know much yet. I’ll keep your thoughts in mind while I’m plotting and begin writing.

That sounds like an interesting story. Is that the one my sister E. N. Leonard beta read?

Soo…. unexplicit nudity. What would be your stance?

I’m not going to be great here but I can say what I notice in reading and what I dislike.
I recently read a book where it’s a very brief “he disrobed and slipped into the pool” which I didn’t mind. Very brief, no detail.
However in two other book I read, it could get really weird fast. Like in one, the MC and his elder mentor go to bathe in a stream after sword fighting and the MC is like “oh, I wonder what an elf looks like naked” and then proceeds to describe the elf’s figure and muscle and erm, I’ll stop before this gets inappropriate. As can be expected, this totally threw me off and I was just like “what the heck? That was Not needed.”
So yeah, I think as long as you keep it unexplicit and brief, you should be ok.