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Kristianne Hassman replied to the topic Short Story: A Chance of Hope in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Thank you for reading it and for your suggestions. You brought up some good points that I will definitely consider. As for the ending, I personally prefer when stories have some sort of closure rather than ending abruptly. I can see what you mean about the angel part not being necessary. I don’t think I’ll take it out completely, but I’ll think about how I can make it more subtle at the end.










