Story Embers | Kayla Joy | Activity https://storyembers.org/members/kayla-joy/activity/ Activity feed for Kayla Joy. Tue, 14 Apr 2026 00:40:41 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 69bcf7f91ed552b51846927dc2889f92 Kayla Joy replied to the topic Where is everyone? in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/where-is-everyone/page/4/#post-101383 Sat, 16 Nov 2019 17:57:15 -0400 Hi @nuetrobolt good to see you. ๐Ÿ™‚

NaNo has everyone busy, including myself.

]]> 0 1e01ca1ba32b9fe6a93f1bdb0f0c03a6 Kayla Joy replied to the topic Where is everyone? in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/where-is-everyone/page/4/#post-101381 Sat, 16 Nov 2019 17:33:01 -0400 Yikes, I can’t believe how long it has been since I was last here. Busy schedule just kept me so busy I nearly forgot. I feel so bad, though it does seem as though Rillumen does seem to be dormant.

Is anyone out there?

]]> 0 72c1e7d25ee231e71733a10c54ed4e43 Kayla Joy replied to the topic Squirrel Problems...Also Not-Goodbye in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/squirrel-problems-also-not-goodbye/#post-73933 Fri, 25 Jan 2019 15:38:15 -0400 Goodbye Squirrel-Girl, you will be missed. *sneaks a homemade cookie*

]]> 0 8cc77b3423d33ad99d9cf7c00f160eff Kayla Joy replied to the topic PSA (Personal School Announcement) and Other Info in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/psa-personal-school-announcement-and-other-info/#post-66952 Tue, 18 Dec 2018 20:52:47 -0400 @bill-of-the-hill @silverdragon @samantha-pen

Welcome to Rillumen! I’ve been kinda in and out recently because of school and work, but I am a loyal Rillumenite, and so excited have you in our guild. If you ever need help with grammar, etc. editing, just tag me. I am always willing to help. ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 0 5c8eb87d52543684dcf3794cacf173d4 Kayla Joy replied to the topic Tormenting a Character in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/tormenting-a-character/#post-66689 Mon, 17 Dec 2018 21:23:01 -0400 @eden-anderson
@sarah-inkdragon
Thanks for your help. ๐Ÿ™‚ You’ve given me a lot to think about and some great ideas. Thanks.

]]> 0 7aeed14631cca40aa04ee123595550ec Kayla Joy replied to the topic Tormenting a Character in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/tormenting-a-character/#post-66130 Fri, 14 Dec 2018 21:49:00 -0400 @ads_forest

Yes, my main character will learn that hurting people is not right, but not until about halfway through the book. I feel really mean for making my character go through this, but she has to in order to grow.

]]> 0 01ded6473f1e9da7526f2fc4cdbd8c21 Kayla Joy started the topic Tormenting a Character in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/tormenting-a-character/ Fri, 14 Dec 2018 21:00:19 -0400 I need help figuring out some things to torment a character with. The character is a jerk and hurt my main character’s friends, and she is going to make the jerk character rue the day he messed with her friends. Does anyone know any ways she could do that? She doesn’tย want to do anything that would seriously hurt him or get her in trouble, she…[Read more]

]]> 0 cbd689ab8ab7fef74fdf3a88b637c430 Kayla Joy replied to the topic MERRY CHRISTMAS! in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/merry-christmas/#post-63866 Wed, 05 Dec 2018 17:07:58 -0400 1) Christmas traditions

We go to a place where they have a sleigh ride through a forest filled with Christmas lights, and drink homemade hot cocoa.

2) Christmas songs (plz share links)

Pentatonix That’s Christmas to Me and Where are You Christmas

3) Christmas stories

How the Grinch Stole Christmas and Home Alone

]]> 0 1ec9c24658d429671bdbfb5f9defc58a Kayla Joy replied to the topic November Word War in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/november-word-war/page/9/#post-62209 Thu, 29 Nov 2018 16:11:07 -0400 So, I’ve gotten a couple more words out, not as many as I had hoped to do, but it’s still more than I’ve done recently. I’ll try to get some more done before the end. We can do this Rillumen! ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 0 66a542998c6aac65b76a644e3025a7dc Kayla Joy started the topic Interview Georgiana Rockwell in the forum Character Interviews https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/interview-georgiana-rockwell/ Fri, 23 Nov 2018 17:50:40 -0400 Name: Georgiana โ€œGeorgeโ€ย Rockwell

Gender: Female

Age: 26

Height: 5โ€ฒ 6โ€ณ

Hair: Honey blonde, up in a high ponytail. Side bangs cover a scar on the left side of her forehead.

Eyes: Blue/green/grey depending on her mood

Clothing: Earthy colours. Brown shirt, dark jeans, and a reddish brown leather jacket.

About: George is a homicide detectiv…[Read more]

]]> 0 0002d550e8ce6d1ba38babe91d0d87dc Kayla Joy replied to the topic Rillumen's First Character Lounge in the forum Character Lounge https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/rillumens-first-character-lounge/page/17/#post-61084 Fri, 23 Nov 2018 17:11:28 -0400 Name: Georgiana “George”ย Rockwell

Gender: Female

Age: 26

Height: 5′ 6″

Hair: Honey blonde, up in a high ponytail. Side bangs cover a scar on the left side of her forehead.

Eyes: Blue/green/grey depending on her mood

Clothing: Earthy colours. Brown shirt, dark jeans, and a reddish brown leather jacket.

About: George is a homicide detective.…[Read more]

]]> 0 bb06de05ca3db85d740e28c8a688ba36 Kayla Joy replied to the topic November Word War in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/november-word-war/page/6/#post-61076 Fri, 23 Nov 2018 16:34:21 -0400 @wordsmith Hi, I think we met months ago, but I’ve kinda been absent from the forums for a little while. I had some things I had to get done before I could give myself time to be on here, or else school and work would never have gotten done. But I’m back now. ๐Ÿ™‚

Ya, I know. I am working on counting all my words right now. I put the count I have…[Read more]

]]> 0 c5d183da71a05a1385872d9d8e7629b0 Kayla Joy replied to the topic November Word War in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/november-word-war/page/6/#post-61070 Fri, 23 Nov 2018 16:26:04 -0400 I’m not doing NaNo, but I am working on several WIP, so I am adding my word counts from there. We can do this Rillumen! ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 0 136105a1f3d6db17273b972753cf07e7 Kayla Joy replied to the topic Home For A Year Chapters 1 & 2 in the forum Rillumen's Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/home-for-a-year-chapters-1-2/#post-59929 Fri, 16 Nov 2018 16:06:33 -0400 It looks great. I’ll try to get to it as soon as I can. I am working production for a Mamma Mia play, so I don’t have much time, but I’ll try to prioritise it. :0

]]> 0 42b3e5c97a0127292d7e8b1ae0ba97e7 Kayla Joy replied to the topic Farewell, Stan Lee in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/farewell-stan-lee/#post-59927 Fri, 16 Nov 2018 16:04:51 -0400 RIP Stan Lee.

He will be missed. Thanks for tagging me and sharing that beautiful artworkย @samantha-penย  ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 0 8e21a55223c8c69c86eb15240157fb22 Kayla Joy replied to the topic Candy Cane Killer Chapter 1 Excerpt in the forum Rillumen's Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/candy-cane-killer-chapter-1-excerpt/#post-42183 Wed, 25 Jul 2018 20:11:40 -0400 @graceabounds2129 Thanks. ๐Ÿ™‚ I’ll keep that in mind when I make a redraft. This was more of an experiment to see how I wanted to start the book. I like it, but I agree, I need more.

]]> 0 f49232e887993daf6ebc926a22b68e65 Kayla Joy replied to the topic Death Scene Battle in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/death-scene-battle/page/2/#post-39961 Tue, 26 Jun 2018 22:54:01 -0400 I have to edit what I said before. Never mind. Congratulations Avensbeck! ๐Ÿ™‚

 

Is the first submission Avensbeck, or which one? It just says the submission numbers.

]]> 0 c2249d1d392b91bf3541ef9da410f43f Kayla Joy replied to the topic Home for a Year Chapter 1 Excerpt in the forum Rillumen's Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/home-for-a-year-chapter-1-excerpt/#post-39567 Thu, 21 Jun 2018 20:58:04 -0400 Wow. This is a very interesting world. I want to read more. ๐Ÿ™‚ I made some suggestions in the doc.

I love this society, and the female character (Amelie?) was actually pretty relatable. I like a character who isn’t perfect, that is prone to bursts of anger like a normal human. I also liked the insight into her character you gave when she was…[Read more]

]]> 0 932714d890421797dfadb442d8d2b378 Kayla Joy replied to the topic Welcome to Rillumen! in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/welcome-to-rillumen/page/12/#post-39406 Wed, 20 Jun 2018 16:20:16 -0400 @graceabounds2129 Hi Lindsey! Welcome to Rillumrn. ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 0 660b0c667928fc3ac478e674553364b9 Kayla Joy replied to the topic What is your favorite book(s/series)/movie(s) in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/what-is-your-favorite-books-series-movies/#post-39255 Tue, 19 Jun 2018 16:23:55 -0400 I am so happy. I am reading all these peopleโ€™s favourite books and movies, and I am seeing so many of mine! ๐Ÿ™‚

Books, anything by Dee Henderson. The River of Time series by Lisa T. Bergren.

Movies, any Marvel movie. THE GREATEST SHOWMAN. Anything from Disney and Pixar. The Princess Bride.

I love movies almost as much as I love books. ๐Ÿ˜€

]]> 0 ed855b89ab083043eae997ef9966fe5f Kayla Joy replied to the topic FIRST SE FICTION STORY: RAIDERS OF THE LOST ARC in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/first-se-fiction-story-raiders-of-the-lost-arc/page/8/#post-39253 Tue, 19 Jun 2018 16:19:07 -0400 Wow. Mariposa, that is amazing.

]]> 0 17db786c4b6e3e1442ff3eb6cc60aef4 Kayla Joy replied to the topic Death Scene Battle in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/death-scene-battle/page/2/#post-39207 Tue, 19 Jun 2018 04:26:24 -0400 @corkybookworm Great job Corky! Thanks for doing the hard part of writing the story. I think you wrote an amazing piece, I shed some tears while I was reading it, and I knew what was coming. ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 0 395f91c5e53b263580f21804315ede08 Kayla Joy replied to the topic 2018 Week 7 - Death Scene Details in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/2018-week-7-death-scene-details/#post-38916 Thu, 14 Jun 2018 19:48:44 -0400 I’m sorry guys. My parents surprised us with a family trip this weekend to somewhere without wifi or even cell service, so I wont be able to help write. Good luck though. We have a pretty solid idea that should be easy to write. I have a good feeling about this battle. ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 0 0181a90d321f77310d950e2d123da6c2 Kayla Joy replied to the topic Brandon Sanderson in the forum Rillumen's Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/brandon-sanderson/#post-38814 Wed, 13 Jun 2018 18:10:08 -0400 Lol. I just realized that I HAVE read Brandon Sanderson. I read Steelheart about 2 years ago, and didnโ€™t really enjoy it. It was good, but not the best book Iโ€™ve read. I kinda forgot about it until I was looking in our library for Sandersonโ€™s books, since you guys talk about him so much. I just got Firefight, weโ€™ll see how good this book is. Sad…[Read more]

]]> 0 054c652567c3a91b95a1a59e4474abb5 Kayla Joy replied to the topic Book Recommendations??? in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/book-recommendations/page/2/#post-38813 Wed, 13 Jun 2018 18:05:53 -0400 @corkybookworm Start with the Oโ€™Malley series. Itโ€™s the first. All her books are kinda connected, with mentions of characters from different book in others. Start with the Oโ€™Malleys.

]]> 0 1eee667cd446f861267d9ccc31c6751b Kayla Joy replied to the topic Book Recommendations??? in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/book-recommendations/page/2/#post-38756 Tue, 12 Jun 2018 21:49:07 -0400 @ncstokes I loved that series. You should definitely go read the rest of the series. Especially the prequel. That one is my favourite. ๐Ÿ™‚

@corkybookwormย  @the-golden-lightย  Melanie Dickerson is one of my favourite authors. You should try out Dee Henderson. She writes Christian Mystery/Suspense. Really well written.

]]> 0 0f0c5da56949ee5af80cd5ee938de48d Kayla Joy replied to the topic Story Embers Anthem in the forum Poetry Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/story-embers-anthem/#post-38465 Sat, 09 Jun 2018 21:52:33 -0400 It’s beautiful. I love the battle cry feeling to it. I am imagining Celtic music in the background (think bagpipes and Brave soundtrack but slower). I love it. ๐Ÿ˜€

]]> 0 62cc38e90267bf06d9c2ce7a378de263 Kayla Joy replied to the topic Death Scene Battle in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/death-scene-battle/page/2/#post-38362 Fri, 08 Jun 2018 21:47:14 -0400 I vote that we do the Alzheimer’s/Gardener story, I wrote down some ideas in the doc that I think will work well for this story.

Anyway, we have about 10 more days to write this thing (I think. It is due the 18th right?) so we should probably get to work with writing it. So if everyone will take Corky’s advice and vote, preferably in this…[Read more]

]]> 0 c22ab69ac7dd07eca89f58a051143759 Kayla Joy replied to the topic The Candy Cane Killer-August 5 in the forum Rillumen's Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/the-candy-cane-killer-august-5/#post-37651 Sun, 03 Jun 2018 22:16:12 -0400 @corkybookworm Yup. It happens too often for my liking. ๐Ÿ˜›

]]> 0 a6207c8128cdd03f9360bc7efee2ffa1 Kayla Joy replied to the topic Write Bio - May 5th in the forum Rillumen's Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/write-bio-may-5th/#post-37504 Sat, 02 Jun 2018 16:31:42 -0400 Yay! *throws confetti* Good job! ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 0 5cc1c1fd607bb117aced683a8fbea132 Kayla Joy replied to the topic 2018 Week 5 - Lend a Helping Hand in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/2018-week-5-lend-a-helping-hand/page/2/#post-37325 Fri, 01 Jun 2018 15:19:30 -0400 @brandon-miller Iโ€™m not sure about my imagination either. Sometimes it covinces me Iโ€™m just a normal girl instead of a multimillionaire. ๐Ÿ˜‰

@corkybookworm Lemonade is good. Try putting a few drops of peppermint in it. Thats how i like my lemonade. ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 0 b8d6c58ce3638cc034b4e1a3eff81d22 Kayla Joy replied to the topic 2018 Week 5 - Lend a Helping Hand in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/2018-week-5-lend-a-helping-hand/#post-37273 Fri, 01 Jun 2018 01:15:58 -0400 @brandon-miller Am I imagining things or did you just make a Disney reference?

@corkybookworm NO TEA OR EVEN COFFEE!!!??? What!? Why!? When!? Who!? How!? Then what do you like?

]]> 0 e9e22e45a442332f2b680c8e360592a8 Kayla Joy replied to the topic Candy Cane Killer Chapter 1 Excerpt in the forum Rillumen's Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/candy-cane-killer-chapter-1-excerpt/#post-37266 Fri, 01 Jun 2018 01:10:21 -0400 Thanks for the feedback. @corkybookworm ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 0 7df1ff5db5ad84f435331b21987a3587 Kayla Joy replied to the topic *Doors burst open* Well, better late than never! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/doors-burst-open-well-better-late-than-never/page/5/#post-37124 Thu, 31 May 2018 02:37:05 -0400 @corkybookworm Approx. every week the guildmasters inform us that there is a Guild War. They can be anything, from a Word War (See which guild wrote the most words that week) to a Short Story War (Where the guilds write a short story or description and the guildmasters vote to see who won) They are so much fun. If you want to see what’s happened…[Read more]

]]> 0 8b561b3e142d4c9d6ebeedc420aeb465 Kayla Joy replied to the topic Welcome to Rillumen! in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/welcome-to-rillumen/page/10/#post-37121 Thu, 31 May 2018 02:31:47 -0400 @corkybookworm So’s mine. I think a lot of mom’s are like that. I’m honestly just making fun, I am not that much of a clean freak IRL. I think the only thing I keep organized is my bookshelves… Even my writing stuff is a little all over the place. ๐Ÿ˜›

]]> 0 03bfea5104cd6618b24c1d9b094c9e08 Kayla Joy replied to the topic Willow Wood Excerpt in the forum Rillumen's Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/willow-wood-excerpt/#post-37120 Thu, 31 May 2018 02:28:52 -0400 I made a few comments in your document. Hope that helps. ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 0 2ef70525487234c97f981747225a92a0 Kayla Joy replied to the topic Welcome to Rillumen! in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/welcome-to-rillumen/page/9/#post-37113 Thu, 31 May 2018 02:18:34 -0400 @corkybookworm I love the Loony Toons reference! I knew we were kindred spirits! ๐Ÿ™‚

Fine. You don’t have to wear shoes. At least wear socks. Keep the place nice and clean. Oh boy, I hope we don’t have pillow fights in here like the last forum I was in. Those got very messy. *Looks around the room.* Tsk. Tsk. People keep throwing confetti…[Read more]

]]> 0 9d14ea02a69af86ea5baf1c366da9a5f Kayla Joy replied to the topic 2018 Week 5 - Lend a Helping Hand in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/2018-week-5-lend-a-helping-hand/#post-37107 Thu, 31 May 2018 01:50:11 -0400 I made some comments about @corkybookwormย ‘s post.

]]> 0 e56dfd6cf96f92c63b6979a5f8cae0a5 Kayla Joy replied to the topic Willow Wood Excerpt in the forum Rillumen's Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/willow-wood-excerpt/#post-37106 Thu, 31 May 2018 01:48:57 -0400 That was a very fun read. I really like your writing style. And your characters are so cool… but I want to see more of Willow. I like her kind of characters. It was a little confusing jumping into a new world at that spot, but you had enough descriptions of things that I soon found my way.

What was so scary that the trees hushed and something…[Read more]

]]> 0 4923b8ed862a50c94d5df1b182d04bad Kayla Joy replied to the topic Welcome to Rillumen! in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/welcome-to-rillumen/page/9/#post-37105 Thu, 31 May 2018 01:42:07 -0400 Welcome! @corkybookworm

You sound like the perfect person for Rillumen. I think we are going to get along just fine. ๐Ÿ™‚ Though I would prefer if you either keep your feet clean or wear shoes, I do hate a dirty guild floor. ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ˜›

I do have a question though. Why the name George?

]]> 0 c0ca49ac50e70c008abb997672f2837d Kayla Joy replied to the topic Candy Cane Killer Chapter 1 Excerpt in the forum Rillumen's Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/candy-cane-killer-chapter-1-excerpt/#post-36991 Wed, 30 May 2018 19:44:44 -0400 Oh, and I should probably mention as a disclaimer that Kyle uses mild cuss words.

]]> 0 73eb601be6d2f819a6a905e1545fa6fb Kayla Joy replied to the topic Candy Cane Killer Chapter 1 Excerpt in the forum Rillumen's Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/candy-cane-killer-chapter-1-excerpt/#post-36984 Wed, 30 May 2018 19:06:43 -0400 @ashlyvye Ok, thanks for the feedback. ๐Ÿ™‚ I was thinking there was too much dialogue and not enough other wording. It is how I write. I am a screenwriter at heart. ๐Ÿ˜› I’ll work on it a bit more and tell you when I’ve updated it, see what you think then.

]]> 0 3b786e3f5fcc68150d6ebfa49c080517 Kayla Joy started the topic Candy Cane Killer Chapter 1 Excerpt in the forum https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/candy-cane-killer-chapter-1-excerpt/ Wed, 30 May 2018 17:42:22 -0400 This is not the whole Chapter 1. I want to see what everyone thinks about how I introduced my MC before I give the rest.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bCayT72w2WTRtieFyio8a_DpbloKabRFvO8tz7aRpNc/edit?usp=sharing

]]> 0 b2a191b455aa0c3e251965d11b65a8fa Kayla Joy replied to the topic The Candy Cane Killer-August 5 in the forum Rillumen's Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/the-candy-cane-killer-august-5/#post-36702 Tue, 29 May 2018 15:54:34 -0400 My outline is done! My characters are all happy with their story arc (I hope), which means I am happy. ๐Ÿ™‚ I writing the first chapter this week, and will be nicely on track to finish it August. ๐Ÿ˜€

]]> 0 fa8aa04c85554ba9f0d4d413d8d7869b Kayla Joy replied to the topic Welcome to Rillumen! in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/welcome-to-rillumen/page/9/#post-36701 Tue, 29 May 2018 15:50:32 -0400 *sigh* We just lost our Word Master. Good thing next week I am starting my book. That means I’ll have more words to contribute to the word wars. ๐Ÿ™‚

Talking about the word wars… are we not doing a Guild War this week?

]]> 0 a1eb0472ea27ca0651548e7ed24c9a14 Kayla Joy replied to the topic Infinity War [SPOILER PRONE] in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/infinity-war-spoiler-prone/page/2/#post-36584 Mon, 28 May 2018 23:12:27 -0400 @snapper I love those drawings. The Loki one breaks my heart. He looks so young and innocent… and alive… ๐Ÿ™

]]> 0 61bfb96542df5b3f5642cc71ef90bba9 Kayla Joy replied to the topic My Antagonist is Growing on Me in the forum Characters https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/my-protagonist-is-growing-on-me/page/2/#post-36564 Mon, 28 May 2018 21:54:26 -0400 @ashlyvye I think it would be more like his story is a side plot. My mind is already bursting with ideas for this book.

Thanks for the help everyone. I have decided to go with the DID idea, it has a very interesting story with it and it has grown on me.

]]> 0 49db83eaa2005f8f409032b122804df6 Kayla Joy replied to the topic My Antagonist is Growing on Me in the forum Characters https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/my-protagonist-is-growing-on-me/page/2/#post-36427 Mon, 28 May 2018 02:39:01 -0400 @daeus-lamb You are correct, DID isn’t a random occurrence. It usually comes after a traumatic experience, like abuse as a child. I was thinking if I did choose to give him DID it would play well into a traumatic backstory. And I know that just because his alternate personality is evil doesn’t make his character perfect. Both have their flaws and…[Read more]

]]> 0 f4c836c595becdcfaf3b0d36c9dfc80a Kayla Joy replied to the topic My Antagonist is Growing on Me in the forum Characters https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/my-protagonist-is-growing-on-me/page/2/#post-36389 Sun, 27 May 2018 19:59:39 -0400 @seekjustice Yes, I understand about DID. When I was thinking about it and trying to decide how to write this I was not trying to be disrespectful to any disorders. I have some people very close to me who have suffered through mental disorders, and some who have lost family members due to them. I have researched all the disorders I might show in…[Read more]

]]> 0 52f5649cc5996b60f0a82cf6c1b806d3 Kayla Joy replied to the topic Is my story to dark? in the forum Themes https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/is-my-story-to-dark/#post-36321 Sat, 26 May 2018 22:19:18 -0400 @sarah-inkdragon I think if you are writing it for an older audience, then you can write it for an older audience. Don’t hold back because your afraid some young kid is going to read it. And you can write a good fantasy book geared towards a secular audience and still put Christian themes into it. Just look at Lord of the Rings and The Hobbit. ๐Ÿ™‚

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