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  • Kayla Joy replied to the topic Willow Wood Excerpt in the forum Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago

    That was a very fun read. I really like your writing style. And your characters are so cool… but I want to see more of Willow. I like her kind of characters. It was a little confusing jumping into a new world at that spot, but you had enough descriptions of things that I soon found my way.

    What was so scary that the trees hushed and something yelled to run? Was it the dryad? Or something else? That part was a little confusing.

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