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@devastate-lasting Thank you for the feedback!

Most of my world-building happens while I write, and this was the first thing that I had written for this world, so I actually hadn’t done very much world-building when I wrote this! It all just kinda grew from one seed of an idea. But I have done a lot since then. 🙂 And it’s definitely a lot bigger than just this chapter. In the coming months, I will submit other pieces from this same world for the critique challenge. 🙂

I think you’re right about the last scene of this piece – it turns into a little bit of a ‘white room’ with only dialogue and no description. I’ll be thinking of ways to fix that. 🙂

Thanks, again! I’m so glad you like the world-building, because to be honest, this is probably my favorite world as well. It makes me happy that other people find it interesting as well. 😀