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  • Veraza Winterknight replied to the topic Six-Word Stories in the forum Knaphollow Writing Discussions 6 years, 5 months ago

    @jennythefaun

    Congratulations and good job on succeeding so far!!

    I really like the story. The ending seems a bit off to me, though. It seems… incomplete, I guess. I’m not even sure why, really. Maybe rewording would help, but I don’t really know. Especially since, when I think about the story as a whole/paraphrased and not the exact words, the ending seems perfectly fine. *shrugs*

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