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@esjohnson ooh this is a great idea! 😀 Here’s the first bit from my sci-fi WIP:

 DARKNESS.

   She couldn’t see yet, but she could hear. Muffled voices drifted around her, mixed with soft footsteps. Something clanged to her right. A drill buzzed to her left.

Heavy footsteps thudded nearer and nearer, until they stopped. Something shifted in her head, like someone was prodding around inside her with their hands. It wasn’t a good feeling.

   Click. Her eyes flicked open. She blinked several times and blurs began to take shape. A man stood in front of her, his hands tucked in the pockets of his lab coat. He hitched his mouth to one side and squinted his eyes in a twisted form of a smile. “How do you feel?”

Sorry if that was technically too long.

I actually have two WIPs, is it okay to post the first paragraph from the other one too?