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@maddie-jay thanks so much for reading! I’m glad you enjoyed it overall.

The Earth creatures and Jewel creatures come from a world I had already thought about and planned a lot but hadn’t really written from yet. I definitely have big plans for this one… 😁 All the creatures are Earth, Jewel, or Fire. It gets more complicated than that, but basically it’s those three groups.

Yeah, originally I had Dirgún hinting more specifically at the truth, but then I minimized that and forgot to modify Sahan’s comment at the end. Whoops. Sorry. Clarifying that shouldn’t be too hard.

The Hunger is basically a complete emptiness, so it has physical, emotional, mental, and spiritual aspects. Physically it eats away at her insides, which is why it can be deadly, but I’ll try to explain how it’s both bodily and spiritual at the same time. I can definitely see how that would be confusing. I never really gave that a direct explanation.

Also I’m still over the required word count, so I’ve been working really hard to cut down words. Were there any sections you thought were unnecessary or could have been shorter?

Thanks again for reading and commenting!