Ehud’s words had been so kind, and his hand so warm and comforting. I really didn’t care about that man on the screen anymore. If I ever saw him again, I’d probably gut him in an instant, but…

I never cared about what other people thought of me anyway, so why should this matter? So what if everyone knew now. Like Ami said… didn’t…[Read more]

@irishcelticredflowercrown

@e-n-leonard

@calidris

@this-is-not-an-alien

@inkhorn

@ethan-leonard

@lady-grace

Anyone else want to participate in the regret sequence? Last call, I think…. ? We can draw it to a close soon…. if there isn’t any objections? … So we can move onto Saevus attacking the castle. (hehe…. and…[Read more]

But then, the more I think about it, the more I wonder if it would be rejected or questioned or looked down upon within the Christian community…. here’s the basic premise of the idea…

The mythology of my world starts after revelations occurs on earth… I know it’s kinda…[Read more]

Abirami

I held Ku as my regret was revealed, then I lifted her up and carried her toward the back where the seats didn’t have any accursed straps on them.

Before, I had just been curious about all these…[Read more]

Here is an interesting topic… I’ve personally done a lot of research, but would be interested to hear what other people think.

When a Christian dies, the common platitude is that he/she is with Jesus in heaven now. However, besides when Jesus said…[Read more]

And to answer your question, @this-is-not-an-alien as to why this particular post hit so hard… part of it may have been the way I wrote it, but I think part of it is because previous posts from Ku connected with you guys and by this time, you guys know Ku and her…[Read more]

As I watched the screen, a strange sensation came over me, and my mind was transported into the time and place on the screen. My senses, my mind reliving all that had transpired.

Just as it closed around me, I prayed, Oh good and gracious Maker, please tell me Ku didn’t experience all that again! Not like this….

Not really wanting to…[Read more]

oh, yeah. though… I haven’t watch all of it yet… I really like how they put that together. Have you heard of…[Read more]

oh, yeah. though… I haven’t watch all of it yet… I really like how they put that together. Have you heard of…[Read more]

……………..

(now im interested….). so…….. what parts made you laugh?  ? ?

😂 that’s quite the introduc- I mean ultimatum!

😂😂😂😂😂

sooo awesome! Two of my siblings don’t write…. but one of my sisters does…. I Sooooo need to get her on here!!!

and Ethan…. it’s okay. 😏 me middle sibling too… We know… middle’s da best.

😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂  Honestly, I literally just made it up with nothing in mind for it! lol. Just thought it would be an interesting twist 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂   👹 mwahahahaha

… kinda deep note here…but Abirami’s character began as an image of how I wish I had been as a brother… or how I wish my brother had been…. (uh, ye…[Read more]

thanks.  that’s encouraging.

aw, thank…[Read more]

Example…. my main character is an Aygiff, which is a race that can transform into different creatures. However, he can’t transform into creatures with his clothes on unless he wants to tear them to shreds.

He does have something called a gaaban. In my fantasy world, there is a creature that…[Read more]

@lady-grace

looking forward to meeting your character! You jumped in at a interesting time. lol. The castle has mandated and forced everyone to sit at tables with dinner and wine to watch a dance. lol. and then after the dance, the castle is going to force all the characters to…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

lol. that’s perfect! Don’t worry… Ku will cover for him. 🙂

Lol. I’d highlight your entire post…. but that’s excessive…. I guess. 😜

Ehud is…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

I know life is busy… hope your finals went well!!!!

I really want to give Ku’s reactions, but wanted to wait for your response to Ku’s question about love. =) I’m really interested in his reaction… Feel free to write as much or as little as you…[Read more]

That was awesome!

🙂

@rose-colored-fancy

that was awesome!

…. wasn’t sure all the abilities Saevus had, so I just went with best educated guess from what I’d seen so far… hope that’s okay. Change the fight scene to your whims if you wish…. =) I tried to do him justice…

hahaha! so funny.

haha. that was awesome!

Okay…. so, this is gonna be……… interesting.

Hopefully this is good with you all, but I’m really going to throw a wrench in the works.

(oh, and just in case,…[Read more]

@calidris

Hope you don’t mind Abirami crashing your introductions…. but, no way would Abirami sit back and do nothing with such a dazzling, dangerous display (especially with the fire. hehe)

lol. Saevus is not going to like Abirami. hehehe.   (Abirami transformed into the flying wolf – the aemirok…. so perhaps Saevus will…[Read more]

An aemirok is a massive wolf with wings coming out of his back. His claws are like sheaths  – the come down to a point, like normal claws, but then double back  over the tops of it’s toes like miniature shields. It has a long lion-like tail, and it’s ears are slightly c…[Read more]

Grinning from ear to ear, dragging Ku by the hand, ignoring her constant whining and pushback, I led the group into the auditorium with it’s elegant tables…[Read more]

thank you so much!!!!

Okay…. so, to answer the question about The Last Aygiff, there is huge spoiler…. it won’t ruin reading the book, but you should be warned. =) Most of this is backstory that isn’t directly included in the book anyway….

The Last Aygiff…. yes. Abirami’s book series picks up with Abirami being an 18 year…[Read more]

Ophelia turned, her face shining with exuberance.

“Did that make sense?” she asked.

Did it make sense?

I nodded.

Sure, I definitely saw what they did… now, could I do that? That was a different question altogether.

“Can you just try the lift again?” she asked, sliding her left foot toward me ever so slightly. “Maybe I can help.…[Read more]

Bring him on! We have a good number of characters in here, but the castle certainly isn’t full 😉  right now, there is about three to four separate groups off conversating or doing their own thing and quite a few characters that are not doing much at the moment and are free to interact with… as well as free to interact with…[Read more]

haha. thank you for your interest. It is nothing like the steamy love stories of modern ilk… if that’s what you are asking. It is a love story only in that this is a story of how the parents of my main character for a book series I am writing met… yeah, not confusing, eh… It was meant to be a short story of how my MC’s…[Read more]

Will Ku find romantic love… I’m sad to say I don’t know yet. I can’t really say yet…

Ku is very close with her adopted family. But… you know, she’s a teenager. lol. Especially with her background, teenage years is where she really seeks to find her place outside her family and has those pesky questions…[Read more]

My heart was in the pit of my stomach, my ears were burning, and my stomach was caught up in my throat. What was wrong with me? I can’t believe I actually asked him to marry me! I’d have squealed in embarrassment if it wouldn’t have made it worse.

“I can’t file houses!” Ehud hollered stiffly. From the jagged hair line, across from ear t…[Read more]

– spooked guards and rumors spread about seeing things in the night while your mc overhears

– bring the ghost in stages… perhaps your ghost is just figuring out how to interact, so that’s where the stages come in; for example, perhaps at first your mc gets flashes of cold randomly. of course the mc would think nothing…[Read more]

awesome!  and a well written post! I liked how you portrayed the dance, her worries, and her euphoria in the perfect moment.

I can just post it here real quick. then anyone else who wants to look at it can as well if they wish. =)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qkFnMaYylWtV0TuCIqZsEq4QaBKswWpt5VW1l11QM48/edit?usp=sharing

thanks for being willing to take a glance at it for me!

Ophelia and Isaias danced across the stage. They were so elegant!

They were so close!

My cheeks burned. Isaias lifted Ophelia so gracefully, and she flew through the air, but I wasn’t transfixed by the flight. I was transfixed by how close they were. There was barely any space between them.

I’d never been that close to a woman before.…[Read more]

@e-n-leonard

I’d say the favorite name I’ve given a character… that’s a hard one. Probably still say Setti. Not only is his name’s meaning fitting, but Setti is ancient Egyptian and is another name for Seth.

Setti’s parents were named Asur and Iside. Asur is another name for Osiris, and Iside is the Italian name for Isis, the…[Read more]

The glass spoke of allowing the dance, providing food, and then having to reveal your worst regrets.

The food part sounded alright, but revealing ones worst regret? Was that the castle’s form of payment for services rendered?

I shrugged. I could see it being problematic for some here. No way Ku would be willing, but I had already owned…[Read more]

@inkhorn

haha! too funny! the signs and the glass message were great!

lol. well, seeing as the castle did provide a stage… forced to relive it in front of everyone would be fitting and sounds like something…[Read more]

Emily summed it up. I say go for it.

So many great things happening. =)

However… I’m out of town at a barbershop convention ( =)  #smorgaschorus  !!!) so I won’t be able to post anything till later next week…. but I’m looking forward to it. hehe. both continuing the awkward crush/love/friend convo between ku and Ehud, as well as t…[Read more]