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  • Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago

    “You don’t have to stand on your toes,” I started. Abirami looked confused, so I clarified. “It just makes you unstable. There’s not enough time to really worry about technique, it’s better to just focus on not falling over.” For the first time, I noticed Abirami’s ears were red, and by the way he was constantly keeping Jade at arm’s length and stepping away from her whenever he could, I could guess the rest of the issue. “I know, it’s rather awkward,” I said, with a nervous giggle. The secondhand discomfort of the situation was enough that I was probably blushing in sympathy. I hoped they wouldn’t notice.

     

    awesome!  and a well written post! I liked how you portrayed the dance, her worries, and her euphoria in the perfect moment.

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