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@jennythefaun

Overall, I think you did really well! My favorite is probably #2, though #4 gets my honorable mention. I think 2, 3, and 6 are all fine as they are, but:

Maybe put “Tonight” at the end of 1

Maybe use a semi-colon instead of a period for the middle of 4

Maybe replace “too” with ‘also’ in 5

And maybe try “One tomb had been left open” for 7?

All just personal opinions and suggestions. I think you did awesome!