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graceabounds2129 replied to the topic Home for a Year Chapter 1 Excerpt in the forum Critiques 7 years, 10 months ago
Yay!! Twould be greatly appreciated!!
That’s okay, I’m just looking for help in the next week or two :3) I wouldn’t even be able to get to it myself today ha! I just did a quick read through of my first couple of chapters and found a major plot mistake… Didn’t make changes in later events after changing an early on event… Working on fixing it now so it makes more sense, then will probably post either tonight or tomorrow.












