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Filewriter replied to the topic Critique Me, Please. in the forum Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
@karthmin, Yes! Chapter 1 is still giving me a little touble, but the part I was having the most trouble with isn’t any more.
It was just like, “Wait, I don’t really need to have this part. Goodbye, you toublesom paragraphs!”
That might sound lazy, but it really wasn’t a needed, or wanted, part. So, yeah. Very helpful. You can see how I did next month. XD












