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Filewriter replied to the topic Critique Me, Please. in the forum Critiques 8 years, 1 month ago
@emgc, Oh, that was you! Yes, I saw those. Thank you! They were very helpful. Very.
Yes, that part wasn’t that action packed and, sadly, chapter one isn’t really either. But hopefully, since it’s kind of suspenseful it will keep readers interested to go on. 🙂 I am trying to get out of a slow part in the part that I am writing right now. Any suggestions? I think it’s okay every now and then, but where I am now it’s just dragging along. 🙁
Okay good. I’m glad it was clear. Haha, good that prologue is supposed to put you in suspense. 😉 Glad to see I’m doing my job. And thanks for those suggestions. They were great.












