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  • Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago

    Hey guys, sorry I haven’t been on lately. I’m gonna finish up here in one go hopefully…

     

    Saevus ducked a blow from Lord Castle, and then returned the blow in like manner, only to be stopped by Castle’s blade. Swinging in again, Lord Castle parried Saevus’ blade, who immediately followed with a massive combination. Saevus brought down a vertical cut, swung and sliced in from the side, only to be blocked both times by Lord Castle. Infuriated, Saevus blasted into Lord Castle with a massive attack that forced him to step back. Saevus then attempted to remove Lord Castle’s head, only to be blocked by his blade. Saevus then aimed a blow at Castle’s legs, which he jumped over, only to be followed up with a massive blow to his head by the spikes on Saevus’ gauntlet. Bowled over, lord castle fell and rolled as Saevus brought several blows down to try and kill lord castle. Lord Castle kept rolling till suddenly he stopped, having run into the Iron Boot of Emperor Saevus.

    Saevus looked down at Lord Castle, laughed wickedly, and raised his sword. He then swung down and blasted into Lord Castle’s arm as he raised it, which deflected Saevus’ sword. Lord Castle then kicked Saevus, causing him to fall, which allowed Lord Castle to get up and ready himself for the furious attack that followed from Saevus.

    At this point Saevus was starting to become reckless. But that did not stop him from purposefully allowing a blow to fall on his arm, which was immediately followed up with a cut to Lord Castles belly-which hit.

    Bellowing, Lord Castle fell backwards and onto the ground. And before he knew it, a flaming sword of anger penetrated deep into his chest.

    Saevus put his flaming helmed head in front of Lord Castle’s face. “Look who’s the lord now,” he taunted as he stood up and pulled his sword out. Lord Castle was dead.

     

    Honestly I have no idea why we just killed the Lord of the Castle, other than Saevus got mad at him for forcing Saevus to reveal his deepest regret (which is that he didn’t kill a specific someone.) But anyways, I finally got that out of the way, so we may proceed. Again, sorry for not being on here.

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    @whoever’s left to add lol

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