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ESJohnson replied to the topic Post the first paragraph of your WIP here and get feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 12 months ago
Thanks for the suggestion! I’ll consider that; after all, I tend to go crazy with examples, haha. 😂😂😂
Catessa sounds like a determined girl! Someone’s following her, but we don’t know who it is– that REALLY adds to the tension. When she gets inside however, she approaches this stranger and applies some burn. 🔥🔥🔥 There’s no Hi, how are you, no Haven’t seen you here before, just You’re in my seat.
I’d love to see a comeback to that, brother. 😎












