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@literatureforthelight

Wow, this is great! Love it! You have made the conflict feel believable, which causes the ending to feel more realistic. Great work! 😀🎉🎉

One suggestion I do have is not to make Min so happy at the end. I feel like it’s a “really happy” when it should be a more “resigned happy”. Their friendship will never be the same, but they have resolved the main conflict…so there is still some pain left…if you know what I mean. Sorry if I am not explaining myself well…