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@ashira

It’s cheesy because the whole thing between Stanley and the girl (her name was Emma by the way) was so cliche and generic. Give up the girl or die…BLAH! BLAH! BLAH! BLAH! And if you’ve been following this discussion you can see that there was a lot of stuff I didn’t know and/or even think about.

So there. 😀

@rochellaine

Aww, your really sweet to offer! Thank you for putting up with little-no-nothing me and patiently explaining despite my confusion. 😝 (thanks again to you to @seekjustice)

Honestly, if you could give me some ways to improve my plot, I might consider retrying it. It’s a pretty big might…but hey, you offered. 😀

Only if you want to.